The two things that I have been ciritized for were the length of the video and that I used too many filler words.
I absolutely agree with both matters.
I achieved better time management and tried to stick to the constraints this time. For the filler words I could still improve since I am not a native American speaker and my German accent is pretty harsh.
Hi Viet. You expertly provided an in-depth description of your background that allows the audience to understand your perspective. I like how you went on to explain how you came up with the idea, as it invests the audience in the outcome of your pitch, making them feel as if they’re on this journey with you. The mention of the worldwide demonstrations shows the audience that your cause is an issue many people care about. One recommendation I have is to quantify the amount of waste customers are preventing by using your product.
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